Adam McWethy
Adam McWethy is a free thinker and always has been since his days in college. After getting out he work on Wall Street for a while until he broke his knee. He then decided to create a graphic design company with his brother Todd. 7 years later they have been working with several companies either designing their web page or even creating it for them. Adam could be described as a free man because he became his own boss. He is a calm man never raising his voice but if his is unhappy there is a big change in the tone of his voice. Adam is the kind of man you want as a boss he is cool and gives the off a very relaxing environment.
I want to know what else I should add?
What makes this a good piece?
What is something that I need to improve or make stronger?
Well first of all I think you need to expand a lot more on your thoughts. You can go into more detail who your mentor is (what he looks like, what he does on a day to day basis and some traits he has that make him different than everybody else)
ReplyDeleteIt is a good start but I think it needs more length and detail. But good start.